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I can't make a song for you, but I can help you to improve your song, to unlock another level of music and composing. Here is what I have to say, hire me for more: KEEP THE RHYTHM. 1. your song is like a walk trough beatiful nature as I can feel it, so to keep the walk trough nature going you have to remove the stop from 0:33-0:36 keep it going. 2. After 50 seconds start with more dramatic music like during the wonderful walk you met a creature that is chasing you trough woods. 3. Remove nowadays bacground melody that associate on techno music and keep the dramatic music until 1:25 3. Now make a single dramatic note for 2 seconds like you are at the end of the cliff 4. At 1:50 you have to make a relief music... Hire me and you will hear more instructions so you will be I am sure happy, because you made it, not anyone else. You have the potentional, but it is all about you, and your dedication .