Safety Shower Monitoring

I am attaching a copy of what I need to have edited. It is a short article which I will be submitting to trade publications for printing consideration. I would like to have this changed into more "professional" voice rather than informal almost conversational tone it has now. I am looking for relatively fast turnaround... this week. My field is technical (from a regulatory perspective), so ideally I would like to establish a "relationship" with a single freelancer for future needs. Though none are promised as this is my first time ever using this type of service and dont know how this experience will work out. As you will see, this is a very short article/assignment. Feel free to add some incremental content if helpful to the message. Thanks. Gabe Sierra