We are a English training center from China, just ready to start up, but our English is very poor, After your reading our website, you will find many errors, so your job is find errors(include syntax error and sentence not fluence) and email me, and then we will change it.
As the time difference , please add my skype to contact with you:
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For testing your English Level, please at least find one page\'s error to me, and tell me why
If you are interest in teaching online, you can also register your account, and I will add your skype for a interview
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I'm a freelancer with perfect record and an experienced user and frequent speaker of the English language. As you may be able to see, I have passed both my UK and US English Freelancer exams. I have also been involved in translation as you can verify in my profile/portfolio. As well as a fluent worker in the essentials of Microsoft Office or any redacting program. I’m eager for more instructions. Take my bid into consideration, check please.
Hi,
I'd like to help you with your project.
Here's a phrase below taken from your website and it's correct topic in English:
"Enjoy teaching with kids from 3 to 16 ? Need earn more money use your free time ? Can you speak fluent international English? We have plenty of students, we have best teachers from all over the world we also hope to co-operate with you sincerely."
" Do you enjoy teaching children between the ages 3 and 16? Do you need to earn more money and use your extra time? Can you speak fluent international English? We have plenty of students, we have the best teachers from all over the world and we would honestly like to work together with you as well."
Thanks in advance for considering my bid,
Raluca
Good day,
I would be glad to assist you in turning your ideas and concepts into professional English. I will send you a skype request shortly. I will be glad to attempt a sample so that you can confirm my ability to take on this project. I am a native English speaker and known for my insistance on correct spelling, grammar and syntax. Hope to talk to you soon!
Example: Welcome to join OXABC English
Enjoy teaching with kids from 3 to 16 ? Need earn more money use your free time ? Can you speak fluent international English? We have plenty of students, we have best teachers from all over the world we also hope to co-operate with you sincerely.
Corrected: Welcome to OXABC English.
Do you enjoy teaching kids aged 3 - 16? Do you need to earn more money in your free time? Can you speak fluent international English? We have plenty of students and we have the best teachers in the world! We sincerely look forward to co-operating with you!
Regards
Andrea
HI,
I have gone through your website and figured out few of the errors which i am listing below
Need earn more money use your free time :- is incorrect there has to be verb in between or you can rephrase it as Want to Earn money or use your free time.
Similarly Enjoy teaching with kids from 3 to 16 is incorrect it should be Enjoy teaching kids from 3 years to 16 years.
In a nut shell i am a skilled and wxperienced professional who can help you grow and expand. I would give my best so that your website can be used across and generate good revenue.
Looking forward for the positive response
Thanks
我在香港長大及讀至高中，之後我於加拿大讀大學，所以我中英文的讀寫程度都很好。for your job I believe that a person who is good at English and Chinese. Because as your English is not very good, you may write your English directly from Chinese thinking. It is difficult for foreigner to understand your meaning. Therefore, I am the best person for your job.
