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Hi, I am selling a high profile site of ours on flippa.com. I have written a site description, but I am stuck. I do not believe the top two sections of the document flow very well, nor do they properly convey the message I'm trying to get across. All the points are in there, they are just not written very well. I need my description to be very business professional, very high profile, and exciting. Currently I think my document is choppy, a little scattered brained, and not polished. I need you to perfect my document. I need to start the project immediately and hope to have it delivered within 8 hours. Attached is the document. Regards, Wyatt